You're Probably Wondering Why I'm Here

untitled poem (vol. 2, no. 1)

   Tue, May 13, 2008 - 10:00 AM
last night,
after weeks of rain,
the sky was finally clear enough
to see the half-lidded moon
in the southwest corner
of the sky,
freeze-framed
in mid-wink...



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Tue, May 13, 2008 - 10:08 AM
I love your way with words Andrew...

lovely poem, lovely
Tue, May 13, 2008 - 3:14 PM
oh gosh that's beautiful!


(though now I've moved on to having J. Geils Band stuck in my head.!)
Tue, May 13, 2008 - 4:58 PM
very nice one, andrew! concise, descriptive, and atmospheric. love it.