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Weaving Stinging Thorns
Sat, April 26, 2008 - 10:18 AMFor seven years, he pleaded for a word.
He might have waited 'till she answered, "Yes,"
but he did not and he took her to his bed.
She did not dislike the King, but he might have waited
until her self-appointed task had been completed.
For seven years, she wove the stinging thorns.
For seven years, they pleaded for a sound.
She did not speak. They read into her silence
a witch's spells and sentenced her to drown.
Sill weaving, weaving still the stinging thorns,
she did not stop until they'd led her to the shore.
For seven years, she wove the stinging thorns.
For seven yeras, they'd waited on the water,
her seven brothers, enchanted in the form
of swans, looked up to see the crowd that brought her.
She tossed the woven cloaks into the air,
and then the King's men caught her hands to bind her.
For seven years, she wove the stinging thorns.
She wove her brothers cloaks to change their form
from swans with strong feathered wings
to seven men with strong young limbs.
Flying, they caught the cloaks and slipped them on.
Feathers and wings transformed to hands and arms
except for one, who returns in the form of a man
retaining one wing in place of an arm and a hand.
For seven years, she wove the stinging thorns.
For seven years, she had maintained her silence.
The King and the King's men -- in their impatience
and in fear of the woman's words that remained unspoken --
had led her to the lake shore before her task could be completed.
Out of fourteen sleeves on seven cloaks, one arm remained unwoven.
Now, one by one, the brothers advance to kiss her hand,
thanking their fair sister for all her heroic hard work
and personal sacrifice resulting in forced marriage -- rape, really --
and a death sentence nearly escaped
in the face of astounding, transformative enchantment.
The last brother, though, the one with the wing,
just can't find it in himself to be grateful and bow.
After all, he's the one condemned to live life as a freak.
What gentlewoman will want him now,
except a desperate one or one with a taste for -- shall we say -- the unusual?
What gentlewoman will want him now?
After all, this is his real life and not some fairy tale.
Photo source: evghoul.bloground.ru/2007/02/
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Sat, May 3, 2008 - 1:24 PM
This story has always been one of my favorites ever since I was a child.
Thanks for reminding me. Here is information about the history of that story, but I am sure it was based in some other folk tales: en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Wild_Swans As an adult I realize so much more in the symbolisms.... and the knitting of the stinging nettles, the pain that was involved in collecting the nettles, and the sacrifice of the sister to keep to her task. Ironically, Nettles are of the element fire, also of exorcism, protection and lust. Seems to me that magical power of protection and ridding of negative magic was important in this story. There was a time frame for the sister to do this magic in and it seemed that much was put in her way to keep her from accomplishing saving her brothers. In fact, the reason she ran out of time was that this sister was to be burned at the stake as a 'witch' because she went to collect nettles in the churchyard. There are certain elements that definitely Christianize this story.... That the brothers bear their sister away in a net over the ocean, and in that time were singing hymns to keep up their hope, faith and strength. The churchyard and the attempt to burn the sister as a witch was also part of the Christian influence. Makes you wonder what the original story was like. Nettles are interesting sources for material to weave or knit. The fibres are very much like flax and used as a substitute for flax. They are also used as a food source. www.wildmanstevebrill.com/Plant...e.html en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nett...olklore%29 www.susunweed.com/herbal_ez...ewoman.htm Fascinating..... Ani |
