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A call for integrity in belly dance periodicals.
Wed, June 4, 2008 - 7:39 PMI would like to say that on the whole, most of us are well-educated, nice, and generally good people. If an outsider read the most popular of our online periodicals and message boards, she would not get that impression.
This dancer is tired of the poorly written articles that value style over substance and controversy over content.
Here's what I wish for:
* Articles written by dancers who are experts on the subject matters on which they are writing.
* Articles that focus on the art and history of this dance, rather than the gimmicks and controversies.
* Authors who can proofread their own writing, or have the foresight to have a colleague proofread for them.
* Authors who check their facts.
* Authors who can identify and check their assumptions about other styles and dancers.
* Authors who can take the time to spell other dancers' names correctly.
* Authors who, if presented with a DVD or CD to review, have the honesty to tell the periodical, "I am not qualified to review this, so please ask someone else who knows more about this style/subject/dancer."
* Performance and product reviews that are neither hate-fests nor love-fests, but are objective and analytical dissections of the performance or product in question.
* Authors who, if they are offended by a particular style or dancer, do not immediately write an emotionally charged article for the sake of stirring up controversy. We are all passionate about something in this dance, yes, but we don't need to go insulting others to show others how passionate we are.
* In relation to the previous point, authors who, when faced with something that offends them, take the time to understand and conduct some research on the offending style/dancer.
* Authors and articles who don't resort to commenting on the appearance or costuming of a dancer. (Please comment on the quality of the dancing; frankly I don't care if someone was dancing in a baggy sweatshirt and sweatpants or if she's in a $1000 Eman.)
* Publications who seek out quality authors, rather than just allowing their friends and favorite dancers to write articles.
I find it ironic (explained below) that one of the only surviving popular and prolific periodicals is the Gilded Serpent. Most of the Gilded Serpent's articles are either insipid "reviews" of recent events which merely describe a dancer's lovely new Bella bedlah or who performed at a recent stage show, or the articles are ignorant attempts that insult fusion styles of dance. The Gilded Serpent's core authors appear to have an agenda: one that praises the old school and degrades those of us experimenting and pushing this dance forward for a new generation of dancers. To its credit, the Gilded Serpent does accept articles by guest authors; however, I feel that these articles are lost in the cacophany of criticism and nearly substance-free articles. I feel that the Gilded Serpent has become the tabloid of belly dance news, and yet so many people continue to read it... because there are so few other options.
I assume (yes, I could be wrong) that most of the Gilded Serpent's readership is the same population of dancers that lament the passing of the more scholarly paper publications of Habibi and Arabesque, both of which developed a well-earned reputation for well-crafted, well-researched, and honest reporting on our dance. Where are all of those dancers who read these periodicals? Wouldn't you want to see our dance's publications rise up to the high standards that these now defunct periodicals set? Or did these publications perish because we as a community don't really have an appetite for academic research and writing on our dance? I would hope that isn't the case, but I fear that the passing of these magazines indicates that our community would rather wallow in insults and subjective ass-kissing and back-biting than to take the high road of objectivity, research, and integrity in our written products.
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Wed, June 4, 2008 - 8:39 PM
yes, and when you start your periodical i would love to be on your team of writers!
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Wed, June 4, 2008 - 8:57 PM
I don't read Gilded Serpent for exactly the reasons you've pointed out, the only time I do read it is to see what drama is being stirred up now. It's really sad and I hope that more people would take care with what they say in print...
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Wed, June 4, 2008 - 10:15 PM
as a technical editor and writer, i can say that most of what you're describing is just plain imcompetent editing and writing. I haven't read Gilded Serpent, but i've ready another popular bellydance magazine and found a lot of the same issues, such as fluffy and pointless articles. That's unprofessional, and it's too bad that you have to deal with it.
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Wed, June 4, 2008 - 11:10 PM
Thanks for writing this Asharah. No one could have said it better. I've been so distressed over the Goth review by Rebecca Firestone.
Hey ~ penis thieves is a tribe! I sent you an invite, come join us :-) Best, Lee Ali |
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Thu, June 5, 2008 - 4:05 AM
True True True!
I can really remember vividly when WAMEDA allowed and article to be published when the physically used the dancers name and publicly called her "Skankerella".
That was really upsetting and I discontinued my membership right there. |
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Thu, June 5, 2008 - 4:32 AM
This is a slightly different subject, but as a professional writer, it's a pet peeve of mine. How can we expect quality for a periodical that refuses to pay us for our work? Quality writers, like quality dancers, work for money. Although I'll occasionally write a "freebie," the decision to do that is entirely dependent on me, and rarely, if ever, happens (either I'm writing for charity, bartering for goods and services, or have to be really really really interested in getting my message out there). When I'm writing professionally for a newspaper, I expect $1 a word, minimum.
I understand that that kind of price would be impossible for low budget belly dance magazines, but I'd like to see some compensation offered. When I was first starting out as a journalism student, I'd accept $60 for a feature article in a community magazine. This was a widely accepted standard, that gets raised (much like gig rates) as time progresses (I think it would be higher now). Belly dance periodicals must be receiving some funds, somewhere, right? Why not up the price of advertisements and pay for good, quality, professional writers? You get what you pay for. |
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Thu, June 5, 2008 - 7:30 AM
Yes!
I heartily agree, Ariel. Asking professional writers to work for free is unnacceptable. Some people think that writing well is easy, and editors that take just any content as long as it is free will only get what they pay for.
As for the dancer who was called "Skankerella", she has every right to sue for libel. Believe me, a libel lawsuit of any size or scope would shut down almost any publication of that size. All those ads must cost something. Where does the money go? |
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Thu, June 5, 2008 - 9:04 AM
Skankerella ? no way. what? is there a link to this?
or have they figured out it wasn't ethical/good business and have taken it down already? don't read gilded serpent much either - as it does seem to lean toward the more classical styles. scholarly research of said area of dance/art certainly needs a place. but you still need quality control. |
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Thu, June 5, 2008 - 9:28 AM
Well stated and I heartily agree with your every point. It's a shame that for every inch of positive public perception we fight for, we end up losing ground by the ignorance or carelessness of our own community.
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Thu, June 5, 2008 - 9:57 AM
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I'm with you on this, especially: "Performance and product reviews that are neither hate-fests nor love-fests, but are objective and analytical dissections of the performance or product in question. "
I don't even read the video reviews any more. I don't think I've seen one in years that didn't say "this is a must-have for any belly dance video collection!" Come on, let's get real. They are not all good. Tell it like it is. I want the consumer reports of belly dance to tell me about the videos and teachers and events, so I can actually believe there is a grain of truth there. |
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Thu, June 5, 2008 - 10:03 AM
Oh girl...
"Authors who, if they are offended by a particular style or dancer, do not immediately write an emotionally charged article for the sake of stirring up controversy. We are all passionate about something in this dance, yes, but we don't need to go insulting others to show others how passionate we are."
Thank you for saying that. Thank you for saying all of it. Our belly dance world has turned in to a monster. We hurt each other to make ourselves feel better. We drag eachother's names through the mud because of personal ignorance. It sucks that I'm getting used to all the bashing being done in the belly dance community. We shouldn't have to get used to it. This blog is brilliantly written. You should definately start writing articles yourself. |
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Thu, June 5, 2008 - 10:07 AM
Wonderful Rebuttal
The Skankarella article was written by Taj many years ago for WAMEDA. It rightfully garnered a lot of criticism. I still have the piece I wrote defending the dancer up on my web site.
Thank you Ashara for writing such a wonderful piece. May I suggest you submit it to the Gilded Serpent Letters to the Editor? That way the people you are addressing will see it. Perhaps the main problem with Gilded Serpent is its slant toward traditional Middle Eastern dancing. Tribal and the other fusion forms are taking the dance to different places, far away from its roots. Not all traditionalists are happy about this and vent in the only place they feel they will be heard. Is there a tribal magazine? That would be the best place to review Gothic DVDs. By their peers, for their peers, not for a readership with a penchant for traditional dances. I agree wholeheartedly with Ariel, in that you get what you pay for, whether for dancing or writing. Many people do not know what the writers pay scale is. But it is easy to figure out what the Gilded Serpent income is - look at the ad pay rate (around $350 / year) and multiply by the # of ads. That will be the income per year. The publication uses donated work by a group of people who believe in what they are doing (which includes more than a handful of editors). I am not saying what they publish is good or bad. I am not defending their editorial content or choices (except my own). I am only trying to give the facts - so that someone in the tribal world can start their own magazine / e-zine to better put your view points out there. But running a magazine for that many years is time consuming and so poorly paid that it has to be a labor of love. You can either start your own, make the one that's there better or have none at all. The GS has readership because it fills a need by people interested in the dance all over the world. They seek someplace to find out about events, past and future, to learn about history , the stars of the genre and to hear opinions, if only to decide whether to take a workshop from the author or not. I agree wholeheartedly with you that tribal has not had fair coverage. Maybe that is because few if any of GS staff writers practice the art form. I also agree that tribal experts should critique tribal products. The question is then how to pay for a writer to do it - and for which publication? You agree there is a need for product review, done by someone who is objective and knowledgeable. How to find someone reasonably priced who is not too busy to research and write? |
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Thu, June 5, 2008 - 10:22 AM
I'm done with the Gilded Serpent...
They published an article were some dirty laundry got exposed in our area between 2 event sponsors. Yeah, it got ugly, especially since it was very apparent that the reporter didn't bother checking the facts on BOTH sides. *sigh*
"Or did these publications perish because we as a community don't really have an appetite for academic research and writing on our dance?" I hate to say it, but yes, that's a big part of it. Most of the community here is composed of hobbyist and they really don't want to dig that deeply. A little historical blurb here and there is fine for them but outside of that, all they want to do is dance. |
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Thu, June 5, 2008 - 11:15 AM
<le sigh>
first off, i will say i rarely post anything because i am of the mind that it does not really matter what _i_ have to say (though i have an opinion on almost everything... g'head, ask me!) but, in this instance, i do not give a goddamn bat'z azz... :P
secondly, what she said. i totally agree with everything Asharah said (and well said at that) however, i am not as eloquent as she or my wife... ;) SO, i won't even go into how many times i have found the GS to be incredibly dissappointing but what i really think the crux of the problem is having someone who is professional and responsible running the site... it seems to me all the GS is known for is CONSISTENTLY being a "shit-stirrer" in the community which becomes quite tiresome after a while... and i wonder who is responsible for that? :P we all know this was obviously a personal attack on me honey and quite frankly, i love it when st00pid people actually show their true colours because that usually means i am allowed to slip out of me shackles and start sharpening my tongue... do you know how hard it is to sharpen iron? yeah, it can be done... but it hurtz... ALOT... ;) firestone should be ashamed of herself. even though she admitted to not being qualified to review anything (and she is correct) it is not a blanket excuse for what she wrote... so, it begs the question... what exactly is she qualified for? hmmm? i suppose the old saying is true... those who cannot "do", "preach"... ;> also, regarding the "goth-scene" in SF, i do not recall ever seeing her (me wifey had to remind me who she was as it seems she is quite unremarkable in her own right) at any of the DG'z or BaGG's @ the Glas Kat (aka the Trocadero) because _I_ was there from the early daze as well and i am SURE i would have noticed her had she or any of her "friends" wandered in since, apparently, all of us depressed goths would have scuttled like cockroaches under the fridge at the first flash of light and love and righteousness and... well... you get the point... ;) whoa! that was kinda kurmudgeony... but true. ;P Let me end (before i REALLY begin) with the simple fact that everyone is allowed to have my opinion and i will always support that... whether they agree with it or not is inconsequential to me with free speech and all that... and with that said... the gilded serpent and firestone can go UNSCREW THEMSELVES... and you can print that as truth. -kzz ps... with apologies to Asharah... you will not hurt my feelings if ya need to amend/delete this post due to its "iron content"... ;) |
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Thu, June 5, 2008 - 1:30 PM
having professional writers is expensive. and not having the budget to provide that kind of service is still absolutely no excuse to have amatuer writers (who work for free) spew bullshit about another dancer(s) on the internet.
Quality writing doesn't always come from professionals. and those who are passionate about this dance and their art who do have wit and charisma in writing i am sure will submit things at now charge (example, look at all of our online posts). I am sure there can be some demand of integrity in writing wether free or not. |
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Thu, June 5, 2008 - 2:29 PM
True True True!
I can really remember vividly when WAMEDA allowed and article to be published when the physically used the dancers name and publicly called her "Skankerella".
That was really upsetting and I discontinued my membership right there. |
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Thu, June 5, 2008 - 9:08 PM
I tried to like Gilded Serpent, but I just couldn't....for all the reasons mentioned....sorry.
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Thu, June 5, 2008 - 11:54 PM
Beautifully written!
The name used in the WAMEDA article was "Skanktana", which was an intentional twist of the dancer's name. Here's the original article: thebellydancetrainer.com/pole.html I've seen the dancer she's talking about and she dances NOTHING like she described. I've never seen her even "come near" the line, let alone "cross over the line". She IS amazingly attractive with a dynamite body, but not one that she misused in the dance. I don't know what the motivations were for the author, but I wouldn't consider it an "article", it was a rant.
There IS a problem in the world of belly dance journalism. I think it would benefit all of us if qualified people step up to the plate and actively do something to help fix it, or at least turn it around in the other direction. GS needs a qualified, well spoken unbiased tribal writer (or 2 or 10). |
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Sun, June 8, 2008 - 6:07 AM
Well, said, and thank you. I am pretty sure the "silent majority" is with you on this one.
I'd write a letter to the editor, but I'm a poor writer :( |
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Mon, June 9, 2008 - 7:13 AM
yepperz...
samira: "...GS needs a qualified, well spoken unbiased tribal writer (or 2 or 10). "
how about a qualified, well-spoken, unbiased EDITOR...? someone of excellent character and singular distinction would be required to fill that slot @ the GS... right now there seems to be a vacuum on BOTH fronts there... ;P |
