I'm working on the story for a stop-animated film that I've wanted to do for years and need some input. I've seen a lot of films that make you go "why did they waste their time on this?" and I'd like to avoid that reaction. Now I don't expect this to be Shakespeare, but I'd like a simple short story that makes sense and is entertaining to watch. Here's a short test film I did to give you an idea of the style I'm going for. Below the cut is the story I have so far. Ideas, criticisms of dialog,... read more