Barbed Wire and Windchimes

Next Door Neighbors

   Thu, October 23, 2008 - 2:05 AM
Dawn the dew slips cold to footfalls,
Called to work or called to school.
Take a pen or take a shovel,
Every calling has its tool.

At mid-morning hear the teacher
Drill the chronicles of strife.
Through the window hear the preacher
Drone for everlasting life.

And the carver’s echoed chip,
And the arid scrape of chalk,
Tell a birth and date of death,
Tell the ticking of the clock.

Noon is not resigned to autumn,
Fan blades whirl, sun pushes down.
Summer shuns to reach the bottom.
Fall’s a verb and fall’s a noun.

Dusk, the rusty maples yielding,
Dusk, the ember, ash and frost,
Dusty script the sun forsaking,
Dusty couplets of the lost.

Leaves that plaster to the glass
With the autumn wind and rain
Leave disaster when they pass,
Leave with summer in their train.

And summer kicks us to the curb,
And summer plays us for a fool;
And "leaves" is both a noun and verb—
At least that’s what I learned at school.

There’s a schoolyard and a graveyard,
Slate leads in and slate leads out.
Chalked or chiseled, all the same,
Slate is what it’s all about.



Copyright Briar Rose 2008

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Thu, October 23, 2008 - 1:40 PM
love it! i especially like the gently macabre undertone (that *was* intentional, right?) made me smile....

i think it's an instant children's classic.
Thu, October 23, 2008 - 3:03 PM
Thanks! Yes, the tone was definitely intentional, and the title was too (though you'd have to know my next door neighbors to understand the literal underpinnings beneath the metaphor!)
Thu, October 23, 2008 - 3:21 PM
Captivating and Bizarre.
But then, aren't all neighbors?

That is the essence of "neighbor-hood."

Amma
Fri, October 24, 2008 - 8:55 AM
This is the best thing I've read in ages and ages. It really grabbed me by my fall mood and shook me silly. Thank you.
Fri, October 24, 2008 - 12:49 PM
Wonderful Briar Rose~
Fri, October 24, 2008 - 3:21 PM
Thanks, everybody!