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if you were ...

   Thu, May 15, 2008 - 9:57 AM
a carrot I'd nibble like a rabbit
not swallow you whole as I have in the past
lingering on your sweetness
ruminating your nutrition
i'd make you last


mefr 05/15/08
Thu, May 15, 2008 - 9:57 AM - permalink - 1 Comment



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Nancy
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Thu, May 15, 2008 - 4:16 PM
I like this one! Your poems are getting shorter, like mine!
 
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