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November is National Novel Writing Month!
Thu, November 8, 2007 - 11:01 AMHere's the first little bit, just to whet your appetite. Look for it in your local Borders in about three years. ; )
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Prologue
When she closes her eyes, she can feel his lips on hers once again, soft and warm like fruit left too long in the sun, and yet firm beneath, strengthened with the desire to not let her hold anything back from him. It’s as if the ghost of his kiss hovers centimeters from her face at any given moment, just waiting for her to forget the business at hand and come into her awareness. Sometimes this lingering presence is annoying; other times it’s a great comfort, and she can forget that he is gone.
That he has left her.
Then she opens her eyes and she knows it is only the wind on her face. That’s when she packs up and heads out, not admitting to herself that she’s following the dance of air across the sands in search of her hearts desire, as if trying to find the end of a rainbow (he had once told her a story about stepping into the center of a rainbow as a child, and that his father had, as well).
This was their dance, his memory and her wandering, his absence and her desire, his trail and her footsteps. It is the dance of Inanna and Tamuzi, of Adonis and Aphrodite. It is a dance that all people of the desert know well.
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Thu, November 8, 2007 - 11:19 AM
It sounds great!
I used to assign nanowrimo in my classroom, but I'm not doing it this year...too many standards to cover.
I've never completed it...good luck!!!!!!! I can't wait to read your final draft! |
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